What stunning pieces of writing we have here! Alfie, Jude, Ellie and Thomas have included such mature vocabulary choices, it is hard to remember that they are in Year 5 and 6. Fronted adverbials, metaphors, similes, short sentences for tension, varied punctuation and adjectives galore ... they are all in there to make these fantastic accounts of a rocket launch. Great work, folks!
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